Revise your summary for the paper:
Acceptable Accuracy in a Low-Cost,
Note-Taking, Speech Transcription System
based on the general feedback
from your instructors, as well as the suggestions specific to your report
(handed out in class). Additional specific suggestions:
- Remove the headings for the four suggested sections (problem
statement, results, solutions and open issues). Your summary
should flow, linking your earlier ideas from separate sections.
- Do not copy the phrasing suggestions given by your instructors
word by word. Those are just suggestions, and you should express similar
ideas in your own words.
- Remove your comments on paper clarity/organization/originality.
This type of criteria is important to evaluate the quality of a
paper prior to publication, but it never goes in print.