Revise your summary for the paper:

Achieving Acceptable Accuracy in a Low-Cost,
Assistive Note-Taking, Speech Transcription System

based on the general feedback from your instructors, as well as the suggestions specific to your report (handed out in class). Additional specific suggestions:

  1. Remove the headings for the four suggested sections (problem statement, results, solutions and open issues). Your summary should flow, linking your earlier ideas from separate sections.

  2. Do not copy the phrasing suggestions given by your instructors word by word. Those are just suggestions, and you should express similar ideas in your own words.

  3. Remove your comments on paper clarity/organization/originality. This type of criteria is important to evaluate the quality of a paper prior to publication, but it never goes in print.